In Our Little ‘hood
The sky is blue,
The leaves are green,
I love you,
You say I’m mean.
Life is good,
In our ‘lil hood,
Life is good,
Your so good,
You say I’m no good,
But life is good,
In our little ‘hood,
Cause we’re so good,
Together in our little ‘hood.
The sky is blue,
The leaves are green,
I love you,
Even though,
You think I’m mean.
Life is good,
In our little neighborhood,
Life is good,
In our little hood.
HI
Just thought i would take up your invitation to drop by and comment here instead of on crit partners.
I do love this little poem. Simple sweet readily engaging. Also I read it without looking to see who had written it and thought immediately that it was written by a very sensitive male in love.
beautiful.